The Way My Day Has Been!!
Ok this is a poem I wrote a couple years ago for a poetry cantest. Tell me if you like it!!
The Way My Day Has Been
I woke up this morning
And got out of bed.
I fell to the floor
And hit my head.
I went downstairs
To brush my hair.
I changed my clothes
And blew my nose.
I went downstairs to get some food.
My dad could tell I was in a bad mood.
My brother spit on me,
And it wasn't cool.
So when I got to school,
I was called a fool.
I failed my Math Test.
My English Test, too!
Because the girl behind me kept yelling "BOO!"
I turned around and told her to be quiet,
But my teacher told me not to cause a riot.
I went to the principal's office that day,
And got out only one way.
I told him how my day had been.
I told him I just couldn't win.
He said tomorrow would be better,
As long as it didn't rain,
And I didn't get wetter.
I went home and took a shower.
I was in there for an hour!
My mom got mad
And told me it was bad.
I just shrugged my shoulders
And walked away.
I decided to tell her some other day.
I just went ot bed,
Without being fed,
And thought about the way my day had been.
The day that I just couldn't win.
Ever since then it's been O.K.
Ever since that terrible day.

7 Comments:
Cool poem!I really like it.
By horselover736, Jul 08 06 4:52 PM
thanks
By mikyrox, Jul 08 06 4:57 PM
yeh it's good and you totally shoulda won that contest! (don't feel bad i didn't either)
By crazyredneck, Jul 09 06 8:35 AM
I thought it was really good! u should right more!
By brainy_blonde, Jul 28 06 9:59 PM
oops! i spelled write wrong! WRITE
By brainy_blonde, Jul 28 06 10:00 PM
Thanks!!
By mikyrox, Aug 08 06 9:29 AM
tat is so cool
By tykiniki, Aug 12 07 4:34 PM