Here is a poem I wrote in grade 5.Tell me what you think of it.

FIREBORN

You gallop across the field.

Your radiant hooves shining in the sun.

Your mane flows in the wind as you neigh loudly.

Suddenly you see a mare trotting towards you.

You are surprised,and kick your hooves in the air wildly.

You see the mare is not alone there is a baby foal with her.

The foal whinnies and canters towards you.

You show the mare and foal how to be a true wild horse.

Then out of nowhere you see a leopard coming toward you.

You shake your wild mane and attack.

But the leopard is too quick,he lunges at your neck.

As the leopard trots away you call for the mare and foal.

You tell the foal he must be the leader.

As you close your eyes for the last time a new Fireborn is born.