New Story Posting
Wanted to let you all in on a new story I just had posted called "Dinner, Mommy?" I will warn you that in areas it is very graphic and there is some profanity. Definatly for people 17 and up. It's a short one shot. Post a comment here or on the website when you can! Thank you so much!
3 Comments:
Truthfully, it was very touching, but my stream of consciousness was pulled aside by a couple of glaring misspellings (I assume you meant 'raped' instead of 'rapped', for one). I am sorry for being nit-picky, but I sincerely want you to succeed. You have an obvious gift for writing, but don't let pithy nuances like spelling get in your way. Good job.
By Oddball, Dec 06 07 8:07 PM
Thanks, I don't mind the nit-pickyness at all!
By gonehorsey101, Dec 07 07 8:25 PM
Such a sad story. I really did like it though! You're a GREAT writer.
By NIPPER10, Mar 14 08 3:22 PM